Dragons Commentary on the story.

(I made this one day when I was bored This was originally the narration in the story but I cut it out and made it separate so that the story would be shorter. It was also the inspiration for the dragon rant's)

Introduction:
    Well here we are we're the dragons the story will be told by us. Jafira: Time for intro's! I'm the green dragon Jafira Sunstrike Veltraz: I'm Veltraz Skyburn a yellow dragon. Koragus: And I'm Koragus Nightwind (Aka Dark Korageth, Kora, or Koragas will also work) the dark dragon of Tycosa! Jafira: So who should start the story? Veltraz: I'd say I should start. Koragus: No I think I should it's my story. Veltraz: Fine then you can do it. Koragus: with pleasure! Jafira: Not him he'll ruin it. Koragus: Shut up I'll do fine. Veltraz: Good but first let me explain to them what it's about. Koragus: Ha as if the humans would understand I doubt other dragons would. Veltraz: (sighs) Korageth please don't interrupt now then, we lived in a valley called Tycosa or it could of been Colosa we forgot we think the world was called Terraset. We were the only ones of our kind left in that region you see for some reason the dragons migrated away from that area somehow in separate ways we were left behind and forced to raise ourselves except Jafiris he's still a mystery (snickers). Jafira: Hey I make the jokes! plus I know where I came from! Koragus: So we all grew up in separate parts of the valley. We eventually discovered each other then something happened.

The Fun Starts Here!:
(Intermission)
Jafira: Koragus what the hell were you doing! Veltraz: He's right you're the worse writer in history! Koragus: what?! Jafira: what do you think your doing acting all humble in our story! That's not you because you were a jerk you tried to kill me when we met you think of Justra and his friends only as servants and you think that fort was yours what about Kytax and the magic you learned and all the other stuff!? Koragus: I didn't want to seem like an antagonist and as for magic it is the manipulation of natural energy through ones will any one can do it thus I failed to see the need for an explanation. Jafira: You were probably just to lazy to write about it besides you needed help from some kid you couldn't read those books yourself. Koragus as if you could?! Veltraz: Your lack of details wasn't all that was wrong for an example what was with the <> when you spoke? Koragus: we spoke in telepathy. Veltraz: I know but all you have to do is italicize it. Koragus: No! that symbolizes inner thought! Veltraz: Whatever just have us speak normally then. Koragus: I have been besides I will edit it later. Jafira: Koragus your boring everyone and your writing skills are pathetic I'd be surprised if any one reads through chapter three! Koragus:I'm a good writer. Jafira: yeah good and boring it needs to be exciting. Koragus: but that's how it happened. Veltraz: its okay to stretch the truth a little to keep the story active. Jafira: and another thing when I met Veltraz we battled. Koragus: oh please you call THAT a battle he used the wind to knock you out of the sky then he pounced you that wasn't a battle. Veltraz: you still should have done our meeting in better detail. Koragus: yeah like I was there watching while it happened. Jafira: enough I'm gonna write now Koragus let me show you how to write a decent story. Koragus: you'll soon find It's not that easy. Veltraz: If you just take your time you'll do fine.

Note from Veltraz: At some points our memory is blurry so we were forced to make up a few names. Koragus: I don't think they really care. Jafira: Nor do I, just get on with the story.

Our Commentary After The Story:
Koragus: Dyaltros?! what kind of name was that?! and the blade of Rabos?! your not creative at all are you?! Jafira: Your right claws aren't good for typing... I'm no better at it then you were this must be the worst story ever! Koragus: I agree but you wrote most of it. Veltraz: what are you talking about if were gonna blame anyone for the low quality of the writing it should be you! you wrote the first few chapters and they were awful. Jafira: Yeah at least I had some action unlike your version. Koragus: The point of the story was to tell about ourselves and we achieved it right? Jafira: yeah I guess so, despite it's low quality it served its purpose.Veltraz: Korageth stop trying to sound smart that's my job! Jafira: ^_^ I hate you all! (Koragus & Veltraz) Shut up Jafira! Jafira: Please don't kill me. Veltraz: as for the Story we can edit it and fix it later but for now lets relax. Jafira: Okay cool all this typing makes me tired. Koragus: Oh! Before I forget-for the final time It's Koragus (Kor-Ra-gis) not Koragas or Korageth it's Koragus sheesh I need about half a gallon of Coca Cola to forget about this. Jafira: as do I. Veltraz: (sighs in frustration) He's a hypocrite at the beginning of this stupid story he said any of those would work... hey! where'd they go? Don't they care about anything but food why am I stuck with such Idiots.